In a hole that is home once lived a little baby mouse. It was so hungry if it got out it couldn’t get up so it starves but there was some close by so” it jump down” it got the food it was not hungry again so the mouse got stuck so it got something it was a box so the little mouse went to go get a piece of grass it was so hungry it fell fast asleep. It got super sick, it needed medicine. The mouse got medicine and it lived happily ever after.
Hi Mia,
What a lovely job you did of using the technique of the week, beginning with a “Where Things Are” sentence! Your story was definitely action-packed and I was glad the mouse got better in the end. One thing to work on together next time will be to break your story into sentences so it is easier to follow for the reader.
Keep on writing!